Emily Wright 16037675
The collage is very well organised composition. It explores a variety of themes as perspective light and shade. The central elements gives a sense of symmetry which balances the composition. In my opinion, the background does not implement the front theme in terms of colours.
The hand drawing exaggerates the sense of depth which makes the drawing impressive and gives a better perception of the perspective than the collage.
Feedback from: Todorina Viteva.
Geraldine Wong 16037430
Good layout of a perspective collage however, a more definitive background may help in visualising and understanding the subject better.
An interesting CAD drawing however, the usage of line weight may be explored further to emphasise the perspective aspect of the drawing.
Feedback from: Farah Mohd Azhari
Angove Beverley – 16039617
The collage is a very interesting mixture. The colour use make the image become very harmonious. The blur surrounding set the centre off and make the audiences focus on the central part.
The hand drawing is a very good interpretation of the collage. Various line weights make the drawing very readable. Maybe some change could be made to the shadow drawing. That would make the relationship between light and shadow more clear.
Feedback from: Xiaolei Cai
KIEREN RAJA – 16040189
The section is interesting and through its compilation the individual components can be read as individual elements however, due to the well worked structure of the collage they are all tied in together. The addition of the red draws the eye to details to the centre of the image at first glance and maybe detracts away from the two main sections on either side.
The CAD drawing produced is crisp and clean and reads better in comparison to the collage due to the reduction in contrast and dark background. the image however is missing some of the detail that the collage provides.
Feedback from: Michael Holliday
MUHAMMAD AZUAN BIN SYAHROL – 16033339
A very busy and chaotic assembly. It would have been useful to include an explanation of why you chose the images that you selected. Panning across the collage, new elements reveal themselves to the viewer as the scene is scanned from when originally viewed which creates an interesting dynamic.
A very good interpretation of the original collage. There seems to be many items placed upon each other so the depth of field could have been exaggerated further through a larger use of line weight.
Feedback from: Thomas Jepson
CARLOS PINTO – 16036036
As a while the image is balanced well in both size and colour tones. The image draws you to look left to right like a conventional landscape or section but the one realises there are many perspectives and scale when zoomed in.
The drawing simplifies the collages form and colour. As a result, the overall imagery looks very different and gives more information on form rather than scale and activity. One would conclude the the drawing gives far less information to the viewer except when considering the form and structure.
Feedback from: Georgina Hale